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fredag 7 oktober 2011

Date at Mcdonalds

A date at Mcdonalds!


Ben i got an idea! What about if u come to my date instead of me? That would be awesome! When is it? Its 15.30 today at Mcdonalds. Damn i got to hurry to get there. See you afterwards.
When Ben arrived to Mcdonalds he saw the girl standing outside. He almost regret that he accepted this. But he walked next up to the girl and said hi. She did not seem to notice anything yet. They walked into Mcdonalds. It smelled bad and was kinda shitty inside. Nice   
place to have a date Ben thought. They ordered a Big Mac each and sat down. They talked about school and hobbys and stuff. Then finaly the burgers arrived. Just when Ben was going to eat the hamburger she screamed. YOU BASTARD YOUR NOT DANIEL! YOU SON OF A BITCH! Ben was kind of embarassed and asked her if they could take this outside. She calmed down a bit but she was still mad. Outside he asked for forgiveness. She just wouldnt accept it. He called Daniel so he could talk to the girl. She screamed in the telephone, YOU SON OF A BITCH HOW COULD YOU? This was just a bad idea Ben and Daniel thought. The girl was SO pissed so she walked home. Ben did the same. At home Daniel and Ben started to argue about whos fault it was. Now they started to fight too. When the girl called. She said sorry i got so upset but it was not really funny. I know said Daniel it was all a bad idea. Can we meet at the Cinema tomorrow i have heard it is a great movie going now. Okay seems good see ya tomorrow. Bye! Bye!

1 kommentar:

  1. Good word knowledge. Write more! Describe people and scenes.

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