Goldilocks is a young girl once were out alone walking in the forest.  She saw a house and walked inside it was empty. On the table there stood  the bowl full with porridge in different sizes she tasted the biggest  one that was too hot. She tasted the medium sized then finally the tiny  one it was sooo perfect she ate it all. Then she saw some beds in three  different sizes just like the bowls. She tried the biggest one it was  too big she did not like it. She decided to give the medium sized a try  it was sooo soft it did not feel any good. Then it were one left the  smallest and it was the most comfortable bed ever she fel asleep right  of the bet.
The owners of the house. The bears got home after a little walk they did  not like when they saw that someone have been eating of their porridge.  Baby bear started too cry out loud. They they saw that goldilocks was  asleep in babybears bed. Goldilocks  woke up when she heard baby bears  crocodile tears. She got so afraid that she ran out of the house and out  of the rofest and never came back alone.
 
Jag har jobbat mot att göra mer utförliga arbeten. Jag är nöjd med att jag använde ett bra ordförråd.
SvaraRaderaJag vill jobba vidare med det.